I write poetry in my free time. can you tell me what you think of it.here is a poem I wrote about my boy friend.

I picked a star to wish upon From all the stars above.. And closed my eyes and made a wish to send Alex all my Love.
So Alex, look up in the sky tonight and find one star... The one that holds my wish for you No matter where you are. And when you see that special star my wish will come to you... For stars were made to wish upon and make wishes come true!

what do you think? please be honest.

i personally think it's a little mushey... but it's rele nice

WICKED!!!!!!!! i like poetry to, but not at school cos u av 2 write about what they tell u 2.

Thanx guys! I have another poem for you tell the truth.

Friends will come and friends will go but the voices will stay.They will never go away.They will stay.Just to play.Play with your mind.Until you go blind and pray for the day when god will say "come to me my child leave the voices and come to me". But that day will never come cause you must stay for future generations.To show them what will happen eventually.Show them the madness that is in all of us.You must stay and pray for all the children of the world.Pray that they can escape the madness and the pain which grows with every day.